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第6段

In university, it's not always happy to explore so many new things at the same time. In your dorm, the student near you might play the same song for hundreds of times, which will makes you extremely headache! You might be the one that sleep early and get up early, but your roommate is a night owl! but eventually you and your roommate will be the best friend. Despite some new experiences might make you feel uncomfortable, don't worry about it. I promise that the good experiences will be much better than the bad experiences. And i also promise you that all these experiences will offer valuable lessons for you and broaden your life. So, with the light in your eyes and the songs in your heart, embrace these new experiences with your bravery.

原文 : Here at the university, it may not always be pleasant to have so many new experiences all at once. In your dorm, the student next door may repeatedly play the one song, which gives you a giant headache! You may be an early bird while your roommate is a night owl! And still, you and your roommate may become best friends. Don't worry if you become a little uncomfortable with some of your new experiences. I promise you that the happy experiences will outweigh the unpleasant ones. And I promise that virtually all of them will provide you with valuable lessons which will enrich your life. So, with a glow in your eye and a song in your heart, step forward to meet these new experiences!

第一句话:

表一起/同时: all at once

happy可以更换为easy或者pleasant

在大学里可以用here at the university

更改后:

Here at the university, it's not always easy to explore so many things all at once.

第二句话

headache是名词，正确表达应该是 give you a headache, 同样意思也可以写make you feel annoyed

will 后面动词原形

"for hundreds of times"可以改为over and over again或者repeatedly

室友可以直接写roommate

巨大的: giant (adj)

更改后:

In your dorm, your roommate may play the same song over and over again, which will give you a giant headache! (which will make you feel really annoyed)

第三句话

起床可以用get up 和 wake up

从句主语是人的时候最好用who

prefer doing 更喜欢...

起得早可以说early bird, 夜猫子night owl

more of.. 更像一个

更改后: You might prefer going to bed early and waking up early, but your roommate is more of a night owl!

第四句话

仍然： and still

我们成为最好的朋友friends要复数，前面不用加the

更改后:

And still, you and your roommate will become best friends.

第五句话

Despite后面应该接名词性成分,不能接完整句子

although/even though/while后面可以接句子

Don't worry about it 可以改为

There's no need to worry about it.

修改后:

Although some of your new experiences might make you a little uncomfortable, there's no need to worry.

第六句话

experiences重复使用，可以用ones代替

much better 可以换成 far outweigh（远远大于） ,后面不用加Than

修改后:

I promise that the happy experiences will far outweigh the unpleasant ones.

第七句话

virtually 实际上 = in fact

broaden your horizons拓宽眼界

丰富你的人生: enrich your life

修改后:

And I promise that virtually all these experiences will offer valuable lessons for you and enrich your life.

第八句话

眼里有光: with a glow in your eyes/ with the spark in your eyes

With your bravery可以简单写成bravely或者with courage

勇气: courage, bravery

修改后:

So, with a glow in your eyes and a song in your heart, embrace these new experiences with courage.

Here at the university, it's not always pleasant to explore so many experiences all at once. In your dorm, your roommate might play the same song over and over again, which will give you a giant headache. You might be an early bird, while your roommate is a night owl! And still, you and your roommate will become the best friends! Although some of these new experiences might make you a little uncomfortable, there's no need to worry. I promise that the happy experiences will far outweigh the unpleasant ones. And I promise that virtually all these experiences will offer valuable lessons for you and enrich your life. So, with a glow in your eyes and a song in your heart, embrace these new experiences with courage!

第7段

In the journey of exploring yourself and the process of discovering your passions, we believe that you will reap more than the growth and progress of yourself. We believe that when you join our study community, you will soonly realize that the university offers not only a wealth of opportunities to improve yourself, but also responsibilities. A wise man used to say: Education is the soul of a society, it passes in generations. You are the inheritor of the hard work of your family and the hard work of countless people ahead. They created and passed the knowledge for being successful to you. Now it's your turn. What knowledge will you acquire? What passions will you find? How will you do to create a strong and colorful future?

第一句

exploring yourself 和 process可以合在一起

自我探索 : self-exploration

自我丰富self-enrichment

yield 产生/屈服

toward 朝着...方向

advancement发展/提高

of yourself 可以直接写为 personal

reap 可以换成 attain

改进后 :

In the journey toward self-exploration and passion discovery, we believe you will yield more than personal advancement

第二句

soon已经是副词了，不用加ly

学术社区 academic community 或者 community of scholars

abundant丰富的/大量的代替many

改进 :

We believe that as you join our academic community, you will soon realize that the university not only offers abundant opportunities for self-enrichment, but also significant responsibilities.

第三句

一代代传承：passed down through generations

更改后：

A wise man said: "Education is the soul of society, it is passed down through generations."

第四句

ahead 表示在前面

前人可以写成 people who came before you 或者 before you 或者 换个说话，给你铺路的人paved the way for you

hard work 可以换成 dedication 奉献

person 可以写成 individual

unwavering 坚定不移的

改进后:

You are the inheritor of your family's hard work and the unwavering dedication of countless individuals who paved the way for you.

第五句

vibrant有活力的

find改为discover

prosperous繁荣的

create 可以换成 build 构建

更改后 :

What knowledge will you acquire? What passions will you discover? What will you do to build a strong and prosperous future for the generations that will come after you?

第八段

We take great pleasure in helping you start an important journey in your life. It's an honor for us that you will discover countless opportunities and the responsibilities as a member of your community, country, and the world. Welcome!

citizen 公民

我们对。。。感到荣幸： We take delight/pleasure in

更改后：

We take great pleasure in opening the door to the important step in your journey. We take delight in the countless opportunities you will discover, and in the responsibilities that you will carry as a citizen of your community, country, and the world.